Fixing the First Page Giveaway 3!

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Time for another first page giveaway! :D

You guys seem to be enjoying these first page critiques, so I’ll keep doing them as long as people keep entering. Yay!

For those who missed it the first time, the Fixing the First Page features is a public first 250 word critique. Using the lovely rafflecopter widget, anyone interested in winning a PUBLIC (as in, featured in a post on this blog) first page critique can enter.

For an example of what this critique will look like, here’s the last Fixing the First Page post (and the one before that).

Rules!

  • ONLY the first 250 words will be critiqued (up to finishing the sentence). If you win and send me more, I will crop it myself. No exceptions.

  • ONLY the first page. I don’t want 250 random words from your manuscript, or from chapter 3. If you win the critique and send me anything other than the first 250 words of your manuscript, I will choose someone else.

  • I will actually critique it. Here. On the blog. I will say things as nicely as I can, but I do tend to be a little blunt. If you’re not sure you can handle a public critique, then you may want to take some time to think about it before you enter.

  • Genre restrictions. I am most experienced with YA & NA, but I will still accept MG and Adult. HOWEVER. If your first page has any erotic content on it, I ask that you don’t enter. I want to be able to post the critique and the first 250 in its entirety without making anyone uncomfortable, and if you win and you enter a page with erotic content, I will choose someone else.

  • You must have your first page ready. Should you win, you need to be able to submit your first page within 48 hours of my contacting you to let you know you won. If 48 hours pass and I haven’t heard from you, again, I will choose someone else.

  • You’ll get the most out of this if it isn’t a first draft. Obviously, I have no way of knowing if you’re handing me a first draft (though I will probably suspect because it’s usually not that difficult to tell). I won’t refuse your page if it’s a first draft, but you should know that this critique will likely be of more use if you’ve already had your betas/CPs look over it. Why? Because if you don’t, the critique I give you will probably contain a lot of notes that your betas & CPs could have/would have told you

  • There will not be a round 2 (unless you win again in a future contest). I hate to have to say this, but if you win a critique, it’s NOT an invitation to send me a bunch of your revisions. I wish I had the time available to be able to look at revisions, but sadly, I don’t. If you try to break this rule, I will nicely say no, and also remember to choose someone else should you win a second contest. Which would make me sad. :(

So that’s it! If you’re okay with all of the above and would like to enter to be the third public critique on Writability, do the thing with the rafflecopter widget below. You have until Friday, August 22 at 11:59 EST to enter!

Yay!

a Rafflecopter giveaway

25 comments:

Rae Oestreich said...

I am SO stoked that you're doing this, again, Ava! Totally entering, and if I win I'm going with my recently-finished draft of my YA Speculative Fiction ^_^

Suzanne said...

Wondering if I would use my already published book or WIP manuscript for a first page fix?? Probably WIP.

Irishtothebackbone said...

Yay! I love these! I'm sure I'll win one of these days...

Ava Jae said...

Awesome! It seems to be a popular feature, so I'm going to try to make it a monthly thing. :) Good luck!

Ava Jae said...

I'd recommend you go with a WIP. Not much you can really do about an already-published book (and to be honest, if you're referring to a self-published book, hopefully you don't think it needs any more editing).

Ava Jae said...

So glad to hear it! Good luck! :)

Patchi said...

Thanks for another chance to win, I'd love your opinion on my YA fantasy opening.

Kimberly Miller VanderHorst said...

I'm just finishing up an R&R and would love a first page crit of my YA Contemporary Fantasy. :)

Ava Jae said...

You're very welcome! YA Fantasy is fabulous. Good luck! :)

Ava Jae said...

What nice timing! Good luck! :)

Sioux Trett said...

Another giveaway? Yay oh yay! Please don't delay! (I have no idea why I'm rhyming but I just went with it.)

Ava Jae said...

If it wasn't 6 in the morning, I might've been awake enough to come up with a rhyming answer, but instead I'll just say this was really cute. :)


Yay giveaways! (There. That kind of rhymed? Sort of. *searches for tea*)

Nathan Cunningham said...

Sounds fun! I would definitely enjoy a critique of my sci-fi project. Thanks!

Riki said...

Such a cool thing! I'd use the critique for my contemporary YA MS. Thank you for the opportunity to enter!

Ava Jae said...

Awesome! You're welcome! And good luck!

Ava Jae said...

You're very welcome! Good luck! :)

Bev Baird said...

So glad I found this giveaway - fantastic by the way! I would have my MG novel critiqued.

Briana said...

I meant to enter last time but I forgot. :/ Glad to have another chance!

Suzanne said...

Will use WIP if chosen - but am sorta curious what you would tweak on published book. :)

Ava Jae said...

Thanks so much! And yay MG! Good luck! :)

Ava Jae said...

Yay for second chances! I'm glad you were able to enter this time. :) Good luck!

Lironah said...

Love to have another opinion on the beginning of my sci-fi manuscript.

Ava Jae said...

Yay Sci-Fi! Good luck!

shazia said...

wow this sounds great. thanks for the opportunity!

Ava Jae said...

Sure thing! Good luck! :)

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