tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post4782296048043333637..comments2023-12-26T18:33:04.681-08:00Comments on Writability: Fixing the First Page Giveaway #7Gabe (Ava Jae)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04778524723148508140noreply@blogger.comBlogger31125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-4082597671817167872015-01-21T18:11:02.510-08:002015-01-21T18:11:02.510-08:00Good luck, Kit!Good luck, Kit!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-36703029145222048022015-01-21T18:10:52.454-08:002015-01-21T18:10:52.454-08:00So glad to hear you found my researching agents po...So glad to hear you found my researching agents post helpful! Also, I think you're the first MG I've seen here! *high-fives* Good luck! :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-37357945310289276692015-01-21T18:10:17.485-08:002015-01-21T18:10:17.485-08:00Hi Sarah!
That sounds great! I wish you the bes...Hi Sarah! <br /><br /><br />That sounds great! I wish you the best of luck! :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-58867919886534982852015-01-21T18:10:02.348-08:002015-01-21T18:10:02.348-08:00Nice! You're very welcome—good luck! :)Nice! You're very welcome—good luck! :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-19978512850534994842015-01-21T18:09:50.981-08:002015-01-21T18:09:50.981-08:00You're so welcome, Gloria! Good luck!You're so welcome, Gloria! Good luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-35612694378427012372015-01-21T18:09:41.922-08:002015-01-21T18:09:41.922-08:00Awesome! Good luck!Awesome! Good luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-12731317888455888492015-01-21T18:09:35.623-08:002015-01-21T18:09:35.623-08:00Nice! You're welcome! And good luck!Nice! You're welcome! And good luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-28285948355400149432015-01-21T18:09:23.630-08:002015-01-21T18:09:23.630-08:00Good luck! :)Good luck! :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-91724608742580068342015-01-21T18:09:16.140-08:002015-01-21T18:09:16.140-08:00You're so welcome, E.G.! Torn feedback can be ...You're so welcome, E.G.! Torn feedback can be tough—I wish you the best of luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-78557335722870774672015-01-21T18:08:51.792-08:002015-01-21T18:08:51.792-08:00Thanks so much, Cynthia!! WriteOnCon helped SO MUC...Thanks so much, Cynthia!! WriteOnCon helped SO MUCH with the query and first 250, and I'm so beyond pleased to be able to share the (much improved) new version with everyone in 2016! :DAva Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-87517839300214474262015-01-21T17:54:22.649-08:002015-01-21T17:54:22.649-08:00The opening of my NA has been driving me mad for a...The opening of my NA has been driving me mad for ages. I'll take the plunge and enter because I think I've finally gotten it right.Kit Forbesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-53348498052354616382015-01-21T16:19:31.034-08:002015-01-21T16:19:31.034-08:00Mine is MG. I'd love to be picked! Thanks for ...Mine is MG. I'd love to be picked! Thanks for all you do. I loved your blog post about researching agents. So helpful. :)Lara Cummingsnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-57724937918553542012015-01-21T11:08:38.548-08:002015-01-21T11:08:38.548-08:00Hi Ava Jae!
I would love the opportunity for a cri...Hi Ava Jae!<br />I would love the opportunity for a critique on my NA/Contemporary Romance, THE REN. Thank you! <br />SarahSarah Baileynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-6339871727507795862015-01-20T21:15:08.144-08:002015-01-20T21:15:08.144-08:00I would use this critique for my contemporary YA. ...I would use this critique for my contemporary YA. Thank you for the opportunity to enter!Rikinoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-9647080459314163572015-01-20T17:07:04.349-08:002015-01-20T17:07:04.349-08:00I would use the critique for my YA romance, BLUE G...I would use the critique for my YA romance, BLUE GENES. Thank you for this opportunity, Ava!Gloria Chaonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-81503900026405421262015-01-20T09:57:06.811-08:002015-01-20T09:57:06.811-08:00I'd use it for my current WIP, a YA fantasy.I'd use it for my current WIP, a YA fantasy.Lisa Armosino-Morrisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-89820456261060389302015-01-20T08:01:58.485-08:002015-01-20T08:01:58.485-08:00Hi Ava Jae! I would submit the first 250 of my YA ...Hi Ava Jae! I would submit the first 250 of my YA novel, Don't Call Me Kit Kat. Thanks for the opportunity!K. J. Farnhamnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-44094576888448448612015-01-19T16:25:38.699-08:002015-01-19T16:25:38.699-08:00How exciting! Fingers crossed.How exciting! Fingers crossed.Lisa Armosino-Morrisnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-90773708923701337512015-01-19T14:30:57.771-08:002015-01-19T14:30:57.771-08:00Hi Ava! I've been reading the back log of thes...Hi Ava! I've been reading the back log of these critiques for a while and would love to have you take a look at the beginning of my YA fantasy. I'm so very torn from the feedback I've already received. Maybe you can tip the scales one way or the other, or offer an entirely new perspective! Thanks for doing these!E.G. Moorenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-74330552558048929562015-01-19T14:26:39.751-08:002015-01-19T14:26:39.751-08:00Thanks for the contest! It's a great opportuni...Thanks for the contest! It's a great opportunity for me to get feedback on my WIP! Woot!<br />Missy<br />missysheltonbelote.comMissy Shelton Belotenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-42818173065099133262015-01-19T12:47:12.688-08:002015-01-19T12:47:12.688-08:00Hey Ava! Just wanted to say a (very belated) congr...Hey Ava! Just wanted to say a (very belated) congrats on BEYOND THE RED!!!!!!! I remember the days of reading and commenting on the query during writeoncon. So proud :)cynthiaroxnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-17779700145076564092015-01-19T12:10:37.758-08:002015-01-19T12:10:37.758-08:00Mmm depending on what elements are in it, it'l...Mmm depending on what elements are in it, it'll be fantasy. If it's more reality-based than fantasy, then it'd be historical. Hard to say off a sentence description. :) <br /><br /><br />Either way, good luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-24157892695407635692015-01-19T12:09:17.604-08:002015-01-19T12:09:17.604-08:00It terrifies me to put it out there, but I'll ...It terrifies me to put it out there, but I'll do it anyway. YA fantasy...historicalish but has no magic. Is that even a genre?Erinnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-29745536267188166492015-01-19T11:30:16.556-08:002015-01-19T11:30:16.556-08:00Nice! Good luck!Nice! Good luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-52063596076289098232015-01-19T09:36:33.939-08:002015-01-19T09:36:33.939-08:00I'd use it for my current YA WIP, The Gun in t...I'd use it for my current YA WIP, The Gun in the Purse (working title).Jessica Vaskonoreply@blogger.com