tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post4407284078181619551..comments2023-12-26T18:33:04.681-08:00Comments on Writability: Fixing the First Page Feature #7 Gabe (Ava Jae)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04778524723148508140noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-41736075507296819512015-01-30T18:26:57.599-08:002015-01-30T18:26:57.599-08:00You're so welcome, Meghan! I'm really happ...You're so welcome, Meghan! I'm really happy to hear this helped! :) Thanks for sharing your first 250!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-7880370163809576432015-01-28T15:27:36.131-08:002015-01-28T15:27:36.131-08:00Thanks so much for the feedback! You are 100% corr...Thanks so much for the feedback! You are 100% correct about me being wordy (as you could probably tell from my email) so I will be sure to go back and condense when I'm editing. <br /><br />Oh, and Caera's knee does bother her throughout the rest of the chapter. Your point about the smiling is a good one though. I hadn't even considered that.Meghannoreply@blogger.com