tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post6508471847259493491..comments2023-12-26T18:33:04.681-08:00Comments on Writability: Fixing the First Page Giveaway #11Gabe (Ava Jae)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04778524723148508140noreply@blogger.comBlogger27125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-28871222775588520642015-05-22T18:50:13.268-07:002015-05-22T18:50:13.268-07:00Sweet! Good luck!Sweet! Good luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-9372668692268818812015-05-22T18:50:10.382-07:002015-05-22T18:50:10.382-07:00Awesome! Good luck!Awesome! Good luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-86307863427040115952015-05-22T18:49:53.436-07:002015-05-22T18:49:53.436-07:00Opening chapters can definitely be tricky. I wish ...Opening chapters can definitely be tricky. I wish you all the best!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-11040814607958616112015-05-22T18:36:10.160-07:002015-05-22T18:36:10.160-07:00I'd use the critique on my YA WIP.I'd use the critique on my YA WIP.Jessica Vaskonoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-33032230737475223872015-05-22T15:14:05.064-07:002015-05-22T15:14:05.064-07:00Perfect timing! I'm about to go a-querying and...Perfect timing! I'm about to go a-querying and would love a second set of trusted eyes!Katy Poolnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-82843945687045603272015-05-22T13:49:59.376-07:002015-05-22T13:49:59.376-07:00I've worked so hard on my opening chapter and ...I've worked so hard on my opening chapter and still I always feel it isn't as good as it can be. <br />I hope to have the possibility to have your critique on it :-)JazzFeathersnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-69256807391105769922015-05-22T03:07:19.566-07:002015-05-22T03:07:19.566-07:00Sure thing! :)Sure thing! :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-23336441360844820252015-05-20T07:40:20.064-07:002015-05-20T07:40:20.064-07:00Thank you! <3Thank you! <3Juniper Nicholshttp://www.junipernichols.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-19634838210620058182015-05-20T07:28:23.525-07:002015-05-20T07:28:23.525-07:00Did you go alone? I really don't enjoy large g...Did you go alone? I really don't enjoy large groups of people and the idea of going to a conference or something knowing absolutely no one completely terrifies me... though perhaps with so much in common with other people (books & writing) it wouldn't be so bad. I live in NYC so I'm sure I could find one to attend...MKhttp://wanderlustywriter.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-91415418911449375642015-05-20T03:16:08.771-07:002015-05-20T03:16:08.771-07:00You're so welcome, Victoria Grace! Very happy ...You're so welcome, Victoria Grace! Very happy to hear you found the vlog helpful. :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-82908849044810347742015-05-20T03:15:24.940-07:002015-05-20T03:15:24.940-07:00I also experience the writing community mostly onl...I also experience the writing community mostly online, but when I was able to go to RT14 it was <i>amazing</i>. Definitely recommend going to a conference in person sometime when you're able to. :) <br /><br /><br />But in the meantime—yay internet!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-3385255300737115462015-05-20T03:12:32.580-07:002015-05-20T03:12:32.580-07:00Awesome! Good luck, Julie!Awesome! Good luck, Julie!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-63484238860901590472015-05-20T03:12:18.609-07:002015-05-20T03:12:18.609-07:00Kissing is totally fine. Anything beyond second ba...Kissing is totally fine. Anything beyond second base treads into dangerous waters (for these purposes) but kissing is not erotic. :)<br /><br /><br />Good luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-25574386292058066092015-05-20T03:11:32.658-07:002015-05-20T03:11:32.658-07:00You're so welcome! Good luck!You're so welcome! Good luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-66017908415224239512015-05-20T03:11:26.266-07:002015-05-20T03:11:26.266-07:00Ha ha I know! Good luck on both! :)Ha ha I know! Good luck on both! :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-45942463327183711552015-05-19T09:58:22.828-07:002015-05-19T09:58:22.828-07:00I love reading these posts, so I sure would love t...I love reading these posts, so I sure would love to get your feedback on my first page!Julie Artznoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-9655591015605578072015-05-18T18:09:47.626-07:002015-05-18T18:09:47.626-07:00Cool! This is perfect timing since reworking on my...Cool! This is perfect timing since reworking on my first chapter for a workshop application. It's a YA Fantasy with the working title Moonchild. Does kissing count as erotic content?Juniper Nicholshttp://www.junipernichols.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-7872169000236483052015-05-18T16:18:41.916-07:002015-05-18T16:18:41.916-07:00Such a wonderful help to writers to get your eyes ...Such a wonderful help to writers to get your eyes on our work. Thanks for this!B Bairdnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-72630450359801648342015-05-18T11:02:25.915-07:002015-05-18T11:02:25.915-07:00This is amazing! I experience the writing communit...This is amazing! I experience the writing community mostly online, though I'd love some more in-person writer friends. It can get lonely with just me and my laptop. Thank God for the internet!MKhttp://wanderlustywriter.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-14040267152517244172015-05-18T11:00:18.267-07:002015-05-18T11:00:18.267-07:00You're spoiling us! I'd love a critique of...You're spoiling us! I'd love a critique of my first attempted novel, "Always Gold". Though I'd also love a critique of the second one... maybe I'll win more than one :)MKhttp://wanderlustywriter.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-18458643290175161162015-05-18T09:20:28.165-07:002015-05-18T09:20:28.165-07:00Really great vlog, Ava! I never thought of my main...Really great vlog, Ava! I never thought of my main character have the most at stake, but I think that's why I had to switch protagonists for one of my books and I'm so happy I did! These are some really good tips! Thanks for sharing!<br /><br />storitorigrace.blogspot.comVictoriaGrace Howellhttp://storitorigrace.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-51300664353921956962015-05-18T07:02:53.487-07:002015-05-18T07:02:53.487-07:00So glad to see you excited, Alyssa! You're wel...So glad to see you excited, Alyssa! You're welcome and good luck! :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-57019844124713509402015-05-18T07:02:35.502-07:002015-05-18T07:02:35.502-07:00Nice! Good luck, Patchi!Nice! Good luck, Patchi!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-34491159604928976182015-05-18T07:02:24.184-07:002015-05-18T07:02:24.184-07:00Thanks, Jessica! I enjoy doing the critiques and w...Thanks, Jessica! I enjoy doing the critiques and will continue as long as people seem to enjoy reading them. :) <br /><br /><br />And that sounds like a great idea. Good luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-30703331135152703482015-05-18T07:00:11.003-07:002015-05-18T07:00:11.003-07:00Yay, another one of these amazing critique giveawa...Yay, another one of these amazing critique giveaways! I really love these opportunities. I just revised my first page based on another critique, so I'm trying to figure out if I've fixed some of the problems ... fingers crossed, and thanks again!Alyssahttp://www.randommorbidinsanity.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.com