tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post2465491446823735186..comments2023-12-26T18:33:04.681-08:00Comments on Writability: Vlog: How to Query: The Query LetterGabe (Ava Jae)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04778524723148508140noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-24992292087041709252015-01-28T04:26:52.753-08:002015-01-28T04:26:52.753-08:00Thanks so much, Laura! That's actually a reall...Thanks so much, Laura! That's actually a really excellent point, and one I forgot while I was filming, but I totally 150% agree. The stakes absolutely have to be personal to really hit that note.Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-40155979730701737162015-01-28T04:26:45.617-08:002015-01-28T04:26:45.617-08:00Thanks, Briana! I'm happy to hear you're e...Thanks, Briana! I'm happy to hear you're enjoying the vlogs! :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-38530971757681932812015-01-27T06:41:41.634-08:002015-01-27T06:41:41.634-08:00Great vlog, like always, Ava! The only thing I wou...Great vlog, like always, Ava! The only thing I would add about the stakes is to make them personal for the protagonist too. Saving the world is a noble goal, but saving the world AND the five-year-old orphaned neighbor boy who always shared his M&Ms brings heart into it.Laura Rueckertnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-28592217795851217062015-01-27T05:05:56.731-08:002015-01-27T05:05:56.731-08:00This is a great series! I know it's tough to f...This is a great series! I know it's tough to find reliable information about the whole querying process. I appreciate the tips. :)<br /><br /><br /><a href="http://brianawrites.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Briana | The Novelista </a>Briana Morgannoreply@blogger.com