tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post1649201690320349471..comments2023-12-26T18:33:04.681-08:00Comments on Writability: Fixing the First Page Feature Giveaway!Gabe (Ava Jae)http://www.blogger.com/profile/04778524723148508140noreply@blogger.comBlogger33125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-88752325666664917342014-04-17T13:44:04.560-07:002014-04-17T13:44:04.560-07:00Openings are tough to get right and often need qui...Openings are tough to get right and often need quite a bit of tweaking. Good luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-57500975955211383092014-04-17T12:22:42.133-07:002014-04-17T12:22:42.133-07:00Such a great idea! Here's hoping I win. I'...Such a great idea! Here's hoping I win. I've rewritten my opening too often.Maykennoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-21607696999764357202014-04-17T10:36:21.215-07:002014-04-17T10:36:21.215-07:00I'm glad you found it, too! Good luck! :)I'm glad you found it, too! Good luck! :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-19938521589359972072014-04-17T09:35:35.251-07:002014-04-17T09:35:35.251-07:00I just love this type of contests. Glad I found it...I just love this type of contests. Glad I found it in time.A.R. Farrynnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-9538962647900271642014-04-15T13:23:37.961-07:002014-04-15T13:23:37.961-07:00Sounds great! Good luck! ^_^Sounds great! Good luck! ^_^Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-185653766597941262014-04-15T13:20:57.837-07:002014-04-15T13:20:57.837-07:00Ohhh yay! I'm quite proud of the intro to my f...Ohhh yay! I'm quite proud of the intro to my fantasy story and it's been well-received by my beta readers but I'd love another opinion! Fingers crossed.Meghannoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-51449826273486744852014-04-15T12:37:13.776-07:002014-04-15T12:37:13.776-07:00Awesome! You're very welcome—I wish you all th...Awesome! You're very welcome—I wish you all the best! :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-21956881009457609232014-04-15T12:37:00.350-07:002014-04-15T12:37:00.350-07:00I thought it was a great idea, too. :) And you'...I thought it was a great idea, too. :) And you're totally welcome! Good luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-25388869572604571302014-04-15T12:36:36.353-07:002014-04-15T12:36:36.353-07:00Yay! I wish you all the best! :)Yay! I wish you all the best! :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-760512628668410792014-04-15T12:11:03.896-07:002014-04-15T12:11:03.896-07:00I'd use it for my historical romance. Thanks f...I'd use it for my historical romance. Thanks for putting this on!Lananoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-19838143144065110882014-04-15T11:39:31.783-07:002014-04-15T11:39:31.783-07:00Cool idea. Thanks for doing this Ava.Cool idea. Thanks for doing this Ava.Sydney Aaliyahnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-14734547709074406412014-04-15T08:27:30.805-07:002014-04-15T08:27:30.805-07:00If I won, I'd definitely use the critique for ...If I won, I'd definitely use the critique for the novel I'm trying to finish editing! Had several beta readers go through it but more constructive criticism would be AWESOME.Amy Dashwoodnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-52319538248474035452014-04-15T06:09:16.147-07:002014-04-15T06:09:16.147-07:00Oooo Sci-Fi! Awesome! I am definitely a YA Sci-Fi ...Oooo Sci-Fi! Awesome! I am definitely a YA Sci-Fi fan. :D<br /><br /><br />Good luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-52868895941996603872014-04-14T18:59:41.059-07:002014-04-14T18:59:41.059-07:00I'd use it from my YA sci-fi. Sounds like a gr...I'd use it from my YA sci-fi. Sounds like a great opportunity!Hannah Huntnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-75668223771234832872014-04-14T17:11:55.089-07:002014-04-14T17:11:55.089-07:00More fantasy entries! This is making me excited. A...More fantasy entries! This is making me excited. And thank you, Leandra! I look forward to posting. :)<br /><br /><br />Good luck!Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-3144460085088147862014-04-14T17:08:41.702-07:002014-04-14T17:08:41.702-07:00If I won I'd use it on my YA historical fantas...If I won I'd use it on my YA historical fantasy. This is a fun giveaway-whether I win or not, definitely can't wait to check out the crit post!Leandranoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-82054035067505886992014-04-14T16:45:53.230-07:002014-04-14T16:45:53.230-07:00Ha ha go for it! :)Ha ha go for it! :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-37785103701045888212014-04-14T15:05:51.521-07:002014-04-14T15:05:51.521-07:00Cool beans! I like this idea. Making a mental note...Cool beans! I like this idea. Making a mental note to steal it at some point in the very far future.Braden Russellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-25445342948939144262014-04-14T13:41:53.859-07:002014-04-14T13:41:53.859-07:00I certainly hope so! ^_^I certainly hope so! ^_^Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-27533965853602448342014-04-14T13:32:45.760-07:002014-04-14T13:32:45.760-07:00This is gonna be great.This is gonna be great.Shineka Robinsonnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-89947736228121717112014-04-14T12:16:45.394-07:002014-04-14T12:16:45.394-07:00Sure thing! It was a good suggestion. :)Sure thing! It was a good suggestion. :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-16023353673995865172014-04-14T12:13:42.682-07:002014-04-14T12:13:42.682-07:00Thank you, Ava :)Thank you, Ava :)Robin Rednoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-61182353424386876422014-04-14T12:06:57.670-07:002014-04-14T12:06:57.670-07:00Mmmmhmmm. :)Mmmmhmmm. :)Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-51881987094734510592014-04-14T12:06:52.716-07:002014-04-14T12:06:52.716-07:00Yay fantasy! Good luck! ^_^Yay fantasy! Good luck! ^_^Ava Jaehttp://avajae.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-606209712314101104.post-18206653626127087072014-04-14T12:03:25.816-07:002014-04-14T12:03:25.816-07:00Whoa, I just realized this was here.Whoa, I just realized this was here.Robin Rednoreply@blogger.com